Thursday, 5 July 2018
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Kia ora, I am _jazmin_______ from Makauri School.
ReplyDeleteWhy did you chose police for your story
I learnt that police carry around pepper spray, guns, taser and handcuffs
Maybe you could put some more stuff about yourself
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog https://makaurijazming.blogspot.com/Here
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_jazmin______
Kia ora, I am _jazmin_______ from Makauri School.
ReplyDeleteWhy did you chose police for your story
I learnt that police carry around pepper spray, guns, taser and handcuffs
Maybe you could put some more stuff about yourself
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog https://makaurijazming.blogspot.com/Here
Mā te wā
_jazmin______
Kia ora, I am Atawai from Ormond School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you said what about Police officers and how they protect as.
You taught me what kind of weapons they carry and how they yous them.
Maybe you could yous Police less.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog https://ormondatawaip.blogspot.com/
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Atawai
Kia ora, I am Stella from Ormond School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you ispland that police are important to the people
I learnt that you police carry pepper spray with them
Maybe you could explain you wrote about police
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog http://ormondstellah.blogspot.com/
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Stella
Your right Phoenix polices do help people so i like you
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